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Not that I was gone for long, just a couple of weeks, been busy with college stuff. Easters coming up and I need to pay for premium again.

Anyway heres a little teaser for something that I'm writing let me know what you think.

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When I regained consciousness my mind was groggy for a while. I felt strange but I had no inkling as to why. I was surrounded by objects that I could feel in three dimensions; as though I were wrapped around them .I couldn't feel my own body and yet I was aware of everything around 'me' for what must have been at least 5 meters. I couldn't see anything, was I blind? Some of the objects were rough and others were softer with lines on the surface and had sharp splintered ends. Rocks and wood? Was I buried under rubble, the remains of a building? I could feel almost all that was left of the building and I was not yet coherent enough to question why that was.
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Not sure when I'll get it finnished but I already have a bout 1000 words and am trying to get to a good point to finish the chapter.

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Ethakar Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the :+devwatch:
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Paullell Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Professional Writer
Heyas!

Thanks for the +Watch. I really appreciate your support. :)
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Midnight-Tea Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, thank you for the watch!
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majorkerina Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you very much for your favorites and comments ^^. Glad you're enjoying my works.
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Blazbaros Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
tHANKS FER WATCHIN'
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majorkerina Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so very much for honor of your watch and fav ^^V.
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Tio-Cao Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
Thanks so much for the :+fav:!
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johnshepard3 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2011
Copying and editing the 3rd part of Altira from my moleskine, should have it up sometime tonight or tomorrow morning. I've also got something else that I might be able to get up on the weekend, It's also felarya based.

Didn't think this deserved a journal.
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Agent505 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks for the fave! And welcome to DA!
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Agent505 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Professional Writer
Sorry, make that thanks for the watch!
(I gotta pay more attention to my messages.)
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